Today I will be sharing a story I wrote a couple weeks ago about a recount of my birthday party. Here it is. I hope you enjoy it.
My Big Birthday Bash
8:01am
The 17th of August. My 12th birthday was finally here. I was so excited to open my presents and celebrate my birthday with my family and best friends. It wasn’t a very nice day, it was cold, miserable and rainy outside. First I opened my presents. I got a new necklace, some new earrings and a new hoodie! Next I went to watch my big brother play football. It was slippery and wet but the birthday spirit shone through, I was so happy for him, he is one of my best friends.
1:09pm
It was time for netball.I was so excited to pick, Maia and Ruby up. When we got to netball we warmed up then 10 minutes later. Tweet, the game had started. Although the referees had a little argument we still played well and were happy with our result. I got a few intercepts but the court was so slippery, so I also slipped a couple of times. My aunty showed up to netball and I was so happy to see her there as she once was in the representative canterbury team.
2:37pm
On the way home from netball we listened to music and had fun chatting in the back seat until we got home. It was time for a shower and put some nice, warm dry clothes on. I put on my new hoodie. I love it! It is so warm and soft.Maia and Ruby had a shower too and got changed out of their sweaty netball clothes. We waited for all the other girls to arrive.
4:30pm
Knock knock, the first people had arrived. Knock knock, more people! Knock knock the last people have arrived. Dad went down to get the dinner from the fish and chip shop, while Mum prepared the dumplings, plates and sauces.
5:29pm
We jumped into the car and went to the movie theatre, we watched the dogs purpose 2. The emotions were crazy laughing and crying at the same time, wow, who says girls can’t double task. Mum made up some lolly bags for us to munch on during the movies.
7:38pm
After the movie I opened my presents. So many nice things and lots of chocolate. Sienna went crazy! Maybe she had too many lollies in the movie! She just couldn’t stop laughing. But if you know anything about here that's not very rare.
9:00pm
Everyone has gone home now, it’s so quiet! I have had a great birthday today but I’ve been so busy I think it’s time for bed now. Good night. zzzzzzzz
What are your favourite things to do at birthday parties?
See you next time bye:)
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