I'm nearly finished my first week of Online school, hope everybody had a great Easter. This week my goal for writing was, Give and respond to feedback. We had two tasks. The first one was to put one of our paragraphs on a doc and someone had t o give us a comment and we had to reply to it. Here is a picture of the teacher giving me some advice and me replying to it.
Have you ever given someone advice on their writing? If so maybe you could give me some!
See you next time Bye :)
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