Wild Writing 🐌🏁

Kia Ora welcome back,

I'm nearly finished my first week of Online school, hope everybody had a great Easter. This week my goal for writing was, Give and respond to feedback. We had two tasks. The first one was to put one of our paragraphs on a doc and someone had t o give us a comment and we had to reply to it. Here is a picture of the teacher giving me some advice and me replying to it.

The second task was to make a poster on showing people how to give a good comment. Here is my poster I hope that you like it and can learn something from it.


Have you ever given someone advice on their writing? If so maybe you could give me some!
See you next time Bye :)

Waitangi Day 😃🏁

Kia Ora welcome back,

This week our main focus has Waitangi and learning more about the culture of New Zealand and the Maori. We had to make a digital learning object about the treaty of Waitangi. Mine is the treaty sitting on the table before everyone signed it then I drew a magnifying glass and it showed the treaty. Here is my drawing.

How much do you know about the treaty and New Zealand culture? You could tell me an interesting fact that I may not know about it?

Hope you enjoyed
See you next time
Bye :)