This week for writing I had to plan and make a start on a narrative. Here is my plan so you can get an Idea about what I'm writing, then I will share a paragraph of my story.
(I have not finished my story so that will probably be shared on next weeks writing blog)
I hope you like my Ideas here is the start I have made to my story.
My chain started to chug as the dry brown grass was churned around by the rusty chain on my old blue bike. I continued to ride and jumped off my bike when I got to a short patch of grass. I knelt down onto my ripped denim jeans tying the shoelace of my dirty white converses. I grabbed the chain with my bare hands and when I pulled away my hands were covered in dark brown rust. I smack them against my legs brushing the rust away. I stood up and turned around to see a light grey rabbit sitting at my feet, I jumped in shock as I was surprised at what I had seen. She whimpered in the cold breeze. I walked to the back of my bike to see that the rabbit's tail was covered in blood and only hanging on by a short piece of fluff. I grabbed my red raincoat and wrapped the cold shivering rabbit in it. I lifted her up and put her into the front pouch of my bike. I wrapped the chain back around the connections on my bike and pedalled as fast but as gently as possible until I got home. I picked the rabbit out of the basket and shoved my stand down onto the concrete. I raced up the stairs and opened the front door. I slipped my shoes off and walked quietly into the house toward the first aid box in the pantry. I grabbed a paper towel, a small bandage and a little pair of scissors. I slowly snipped the extra fur off her tail, wet the paper towel, cleaned away the blood and wrapped it in a bandage. My head slowly turned to the right as I saw4 blonde pigtails flap up and down around the corner. I stood quickly in front of the rabbit trying to hide her. But all I could do was not enough. My two older sister walked straight behind me all I could her was
“How Poor of you to bring dirty wild animals into our house!” One Screamed .
“This rabbit was hurt and needed some help, I was just trying to be kind” Charles replied in a trembling voice.
“Never will you do this again you dirty young man, GET OUT” The oldest shouted in his face.
Stay tuned for the finish result next week!
Whats your fav type of story to write?
See you next time Bye :)
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