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this week for writing we finished our speeches and next week we will be rehearsing them. Right now I will explain the 10 pieces of information we had to use, we called them shapes. I wrote them all separately then put them together so my speech is only 6 paragraphs but it includes all the key shapes. Here they are.
Rhetorical question
Hard hitting statistics
Specify problem
Challenge
Solution
Change
Call to action
Aims
Acting together
Big finish
Here is my favourite paragraph I have written so far,
In the end we aim that world hunger may not be a thing by 2030, due to Covid-19 these
time limits may be extended. Why shouldn’t we start now. Starting in a couples years time wont help those that pass away while we are trying to make a start. Lets come together and start now!
Overcoming Hunger and Poverty is not a task of charity, it is an act of justice, It is man made
and it can be over come and combated, by the actions of human beings, sometimes it falls on
a generation to be great, you can be that generation. Let your greatness blossom.-Nelson Mandela.
What type of writing do you like doing?
See you next time Bye :)
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