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Saturday, August 22, 2020

Writing W4

 Aloha welcome back to my blog, 

this week for writing I just continued to write my speech. In next weeks writing blog I will teach you about the shapes we are using to form out persuasive text. This week we found facts and wrote about 3 different shapes. My speech is really starting to come together! here is one of the paragraphs I wrote this week.

This is part of my first paragraph and my third paragraph 

The united nations estimate that 9 million people starve to death every year. In America alone

41 million people struggle to provide food for their families or even themselves along with lots of

other countries. The Central African Republic remains at the top of the list as the hungriest

country in the world.

The main aim is to end world hunger, to have food security and achieve sustainable agriculture.

We all want our families to have lots of healthy and nutritious food, but when chuck away the

extra food scraps we seem to not think about those in other countries or even those in our country

that live everyday with a small bowl of food that needs to feed the whole family.  A world with

zero hunger can positively impact our economies, health, education, equality and social

development, the goal is to have the issue solved by 2030. Covid-19 has negatively impacted

world hunger. That's according to a yearly report published by the UN into the state of food

security and nutrition worldwide. They stated that nearly 690 million people went hungry in 2019

and that number could rise by between 90 and 132 million in 2020.


I hope you like my speech so far, what do you like most about it?

See you next time Bye :)


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