This week for Writing we continued to focus on the Hansel and Gretal story. We wrote sentences with Repetition,Alliteration and one other one.
She fed him caramelized cookies, she fed him chocolate cookies, she fed him crunchy cookies, she fed him crunchy caramelized cookies and she fed him crunchy chocolate cookies.
He ate perfect pasta, He ate pink pasta, He ate pepperoni pizza
He got fatter and fatter, he got wider and wider, He grew outwards and outwards and soon he would be the fattest and largest he could possibly be.
Gretal was filled with a great idea, he grabbed a thin bone for the witch to feel he bamboozled the old lady making her think he hadn't gain any weight keeping himself safe from her massive stomach.
What is your favourite text feature to use in writing?
See you next time Bye
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